Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Creative Writing - Visit of the Hospital

"Many have been disappearing near Judy's mental hospital." the reporter said.
"Ben, never ever go near that madhouse, okay?"
"But mom...."
"You heard the news, so don't ever go near there."
"Okay..."
I should have listened to my mom; everything would not have happened if I did.

It was very unusual to have a cloudy day in Danielville and it was also the day that I've promised my friends to go on the adventure to the m.h. (the mental hospital a.k.a. the madhouse.) The expedition had five members Daniel the nerd, Stella the beautiful, Will the handsome, Sarah the quiet, and Ben which is me. We met each other when at the beginning of the year and we consistently met at the m.h. However, exploring the inner side of the building was a whole new dimension and we even decided to go in the m.h. at midnight. I really didn't like the "going to the m.h. at night" part; however the rest of the expedition seemed to like it so we agreed with the plan. The day of the adventure came I was heading to the m.h. Just then, millions of thoughts popped into my head Mom warning me never to approach the m.h., grandpa talking about the curse of the m.h. which is why so many people are disappearing, and etc. I was afraid, scared, and my head went blank. But I didn't want to let my friends down so I kept my way going. When I reached the m.h., everyone was here. Then the thoughts popped into my head again.
"Guys...I don't think we shouldn't go on this adventure..." I said.
"Don't be such a scardey cat, there's nothing to be afraid of." Will stated.
"According to my research, there's no such thing as a ghost or those things that people are scared of." Daniel explained.
"I think Will and Daniel are right." Stella said.
"I think so too..." Sarah added quietly.
So...our expedition set our way to the m.h. I wondered where their great confidence comes from and I knew for sure that this will not go well.



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2 comments:

  1. Minjoong, I enjoyed reading your story visiting the Mental Hospital and the adventures you and your friends had. You chose good endings and illustrated your story well. Keep up the good work.

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